NotLeLee's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[FIRE IN THE HOLE]

goes hard- some would even say its fire

[random bullshit go!]

what the hell is gaycore

[Where there is darkness there is light]

"As the sun burst, everything went black.
The land tarnished with inky debris, there was only darkness.
Suddenly, a seed of light flecked past the horizon, illuminating the grey.
It was hope, in this dying existence.
It was impossibly bright against the dark, a guiding fragment of starlight, leading toward salvation.

A group of survivors, hopeless, but determined, must find the light, the hope.
To break this curse of dark. To bring back life to the broken world."

Good song, its like the opening cutscene in a game!
(i wrote all that yes)

DaxCamdaxian responds:

Thank you very much for your comment, this tune could definitely fit well for the introduction of a story :)

[Alternate 8-bit]

Pretty cool

[tame]

Its funny that we both released "silly" songs in the same 30mins
but this isn't silly its slapping!

PinkShirtDude responds:

Silly music always slaps

[tida]

Pretty powerful! (emotionally)

[Team Kickback Theme]

If I were older I would be reminiscing so hard hehe. I like the chilled 1:22 bells (bells? synth? i dunno) but you might wanna turn down the volume of the guitar riff at 1:29, it sounds a tad jarring when it first comes in :) have a nice day

also that bass (or you called it "faux guitar"?) at the end is AWESOME

Edit: It sounds lots better now cool!

Kapuko responds:

Yep, indeed! Fixed!

[Slap/Back!]

This slaps, good job! You should try using slap bass in a song, it would be fun…

[Demo Song]

Everything is in different keys!

Maybe this will help?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xY9Q0R0G2jM

When you're using loops, make sure they are all in the same key, because otherwise the notes will "clash" which means "the quality of sounds that seems unstable and has an aural need to resolve to a stable consonance" Which basically means it hurts your ears and you want it to go away. (not that your music makes me want it to go away, I just copypasted off some website)

I use a different music software to you so I have no clue how it works, but try and make the loops say they are in the same key, it would sound so much better.

still cool though

Edit: What software do you use?

y9x responds:

If that involves me going into the MIDI editor, I can't do that bc of limitations in the version I use.
edit: fl studio fruity edition

[Hurricane (Original Mix)]

poggers

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

Thanks buddy! <3