NotLeLee's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-= We Are the Firemakers! =-]

This is cool!
The buildup is really good with the synths and the introduction of ideas!
However I feel like the main guitar isn’t powerful enough, I’m not sure the staccato playing style works as it doesn’t satisfy the buildup.
Could be helped by some reverb and/or delay.
I think some more variation in instrumentation could help. You have like 4 different melodies all on the same guitar, I need some contrast bruh

Love the vibes tho

Notmyfault09 responds:

Yeeeaah, I completely agree with you.
Not to mention I had a great trouble with mixing n shit.....
Thx for the review , though. Much appreciated = )

[bloom]

Yippee!! ahh beat.

The chord progression is real nice
Synth that comes in at 1:05 is real loud
Could be nice to have some differentiation in the chords or some kinda big change cause it gets a bit repetitive

I love this tho lol

beenibroh responds:

i really appreciate the feedback, especially as i'm not entirely proud of this song. just wanted to get it out + testing some VSTs...

[Dog Feces - NGUAC 2025]

This is super energetic and creative!
Structure is a bit all over the place tho. I feel like the 0:25 section should be double its current length. It feels like the main theme to me, i want more of it!!
“Popped out this bitch” is a crazy way to say that u released a song LMAO
Good luck for NGUAC!
(Btw u may have spelt “fecies” wrong, I’m pretty sure it doesn’t have an i in it)

SpoiledJif responds:

Thank you for the feedback! In post I was kind of feeling that maybe I should have extended that piano section. I also felt I could have done more with that guitar part as well. Honestly i think i might update the song and change a few things. (also ive fixed the feces. I am awful at spelling lmao)

[BeepBox-Song 104]

Might try out Ultrabox, since this sounds so cool!
Also what’s the art?

DoTeRqwe responds:

thank you! :D yea u should give it a try, its pretty awesome
its a really big robot that destroys some city

[Bad song]

False advertising
Intro is a bit empty but is built upon nicely
All elements work together and are interesting
Could be nice to have another section
But this is cool!
Don’t call yourself bad

Senseimaster99 responds:

I call myself bad in a lot of things. Strangely it gives me determination to try and improve. I’m only using garage band so the features are very limited but some people make good songs on it. Thanks for the feedback!

[Boardwalk Market]

HOLY COW this is like something straight outta mario sunshine whatttttt
Love this

ThePhreshPhrog responds:

Thank you, the accordion gives it that vibe for sure!

[BeepBox-Song 101]

Love the percussion in this

DoTeRqwe responds:

Thank you :d
yee, i really like how percussion turned out in here too :d

[Vainglory; It's Tinted in Crimson!]

yoo he still exists!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edit: sorry was doing a newgrounds offensive% speedrun

AnOblivion responds:

s h e

[Chocnoon & radon - Sahara Spin (DCLXXVI) [NGMC2025 Round 3]]

what the brick
Most of the drops are hard but stuff in between could be much better
Also weird structure
Also what does this have to do with racing
It’s alright. 6-7/10 for me.

nyrrr responds:

Yeah I struggled here lmao. Trance does not lend itself well to racing at all. I’ll lock in next round I do tho 🤫

[rus - Domain of Drowning]

Absolute Cinema

RusNG responds:

Thanks!!!