NotLeLee's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Demo Song]

Everything is in different keys!

Maybe this will help?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xY9Q0R0G2jM

When you're using loops, make sure they are all in the same key, because otherwise the notes will "clash" which means "the quality of sounds that seems unstable and has an aural need to resolve to a stable consonance" Which basically means it hurts your ears and you want it to go away. (not that your music makes me want it to go away, I just copypasted off some website)

I use a different music software to you so I have no clue how it works, but try and make the loops say they are in the same key, it would sound so much better.

still cool though

Edit: What software do you use?

y9x responds:

If that involves me going into the MIDI editor, I can't do that bc of limitations in the version I use.
edit: fl studio fruity edition

[Hurricane (Original Mix)]

poggers

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

Thanks buddy! <3

[Dramania]

Okay, 1:36 that wooden-sounding pitched percussion is outta tune sorry dude! I love the transition into different drums at 0:56 tho, but the drums before get a little repetitive. The repeated orchestra crash (I do not know if that is the right name lol) is kinda jarring in the 1:36 part as well… everything else is alright but ye, those are the main troubles.

I feel bad now, I’m sorry…

y9x responds:

most music, like this one i make as a joke, so i dont focus to much on quality but i do make sure i have it sound decent while still having the joke gimmick thing that the song is based around, its called dramania because of that dramatic sound that repeats, hence dramana, drama + mania = dramania, also fl studio fruity edition only allows me to use 8 different loops/plugins per project, so i am heavily limited, i could do the workaround i did for one of my first songs but im not in the mood for that. as per the jarring part, thats the point, its meant to be all crazy like that, this is a dumb song so it makes sense.

[Air Detected]

I just listened to your fire in the hole remix and therefore thought the guy was saying fire in the hole. I am very disoriented rn

NiclasNiplob responds:

``Here are the lyrics: Fire in the hole
Rock on the ground
Water on the hill
Air detected``

[Willing to The Gate of Hell]

A different drum sample oh lord
…but I hear that same violin all the time too!
MAKE SOMETHING purely ORIGINAL pls
(Maybe try using something other than loops, make your own riffs and shizzle, you can do it bro)

AnOblivion responds:

Too busy listening to Dash Spider Jumpscares Compilation, will lock this comment in the endless abyss of my dementia

[J E W E L]

Is that violin with overdrive?!
wtf dude

(also all of your songs have this exact same drumbeat why TRY SOMETHING DIFFERENT FOR ONCE PLS)

AnOblivion responds:

It's catchy ok?????

[Music Breakdown]

awesome but I kinda think something should happen or get added on around 0:15, or maybe have it build up instead of going straight into it in the the first section. Perhaps try using crescendos (going quiet to loud) for that!

I do really like 1:46 and onwards though that part slaps

y9x responds:

i am cooking up something and i think the drum beat is really good and catchy

[Walking down Esplanade Drive]

What time signature is this in, I’m so freaking confused lol

KCan responds:

10/4

[Oil paint resetting]

Your use of percussion, especially in the last half, is really smart! Nice one

DaxCamdaxian responds:

Cool, thank you! :D

[Make over machine]

I really like it but the percussion sounds a little goofy imo

DaxCamdaxian responds:

You're right about that, I like that this song is more relaxed, closer to something cartoonish than most of the songs I composed for this Jam, thanks for giving it a listen :)